In 250 words or less, please tell us about your chosen field of study for college/university. Why have you chosen this field? If you are undecided, please discuss a few of the fields of study are you are considering and why.
As a child, I was very indecisive concerning what I wanted to be when I grew up. I considered a myriad of careers, from being a teacher to entering the fashion industry. Of the many professions that I had contemplated, I knew that I did not want to go into the medical field. A girl who spent most of her childhood playing dress up and fantasizing about becoming a Disney princess, I knew that I wanted my future occupation to be something glamorous. Nonetheless, this all changed on September 14, 2005, when I was diagnosed with Hodgkin’s disease. Forced to spend the majority of my seventh grade year in the hospital, my life was anything but enchanting. Despite cancer being the most challenging thing I’ve ever dealt with, much good came out of my struggle with it. I learned to take any negative situation that I am placed in and make it into something positive. I therefore discovered that just as my doctor had helped me to be cured of cancer, I want to spend my life helping others. I am now positive that I want to study medicine and become a neonatologist in the future. The main reason that I had once considered becoming a teacher was that I love children. As a neonatologist, I will be able to care for young lives. I can give them a second chance at life, just as I received.
~Kellie
Kellie I never knew you had Hodgkin's disease! How terrifying!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all I really enjoyed this essay. It was well-written, answered the prompt perfectly, and came from the heart. I always wondered why you wanted to be a doctor and have doubted the choice due to your personality. But this essay allowed me to understand. Past hardships have led to the decision, and that is something I can relate to and completely respect. I believe you're going to be a great neonatologist. Great essay!
-Taylor C.
Kellie, this part of your essay really shows an honest and sincere yearning to help others! I'm sure the college you applied to will see your great strength and caring nature! I too greatly admire the medical profession and I feel like one of my main purposes in ife is to help people through the most difficult times in their lives. I love science and I can't imagine a better way to spend my life than to work in a hospital and help people when they need it the most. I want to be a nurse/nurse practitioner, making a difference and helping lives everyday. I know I don't know you that well, but I feel like I do now, and the college admissions officers will too! I'm sure you'll get the gig Kellie! :)
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Wow, I find your story very moving. This is a fantastic college essay it really depicts your strength and determination. I'm sure what ever school you applied to will glady accept you.
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There is no doubt that this essay is both unique and deep. I'm glad you were willing to share such a touching story with us.
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